Thursday 16 November 2017

Collecting Inspiration

pencil and blue notebook on red background
I've started carrying around a little notebook in which to gather thoughts, ideas and little snippets of overheard conversation. I'd like to say this is inspiring me and, in a way, it is. I have already filled three pages, plus an extra half-page of misquotes and mispronunciations I'm collecting for a character in the novel I'm currently working on.
The advantage of using a little book like this is that I feel (and I know this is idealistic) more connected to the ideas if I'm writing them down with a pen. I recall these ideas more easily than ones I stick into OneNote.
Now, I'm not saying OneNote (and Evernote, although I personally feel more at home in the Microsoft offering) isn't a useful tool: If I feel inspired while I have my phone in my hand I can start a new note with the idea as the title; later I can come back and stack additions and related inspiration to that note. With a physical notebook, I have to flip pages to connect inspirations and am finding myself transferring those to OneNote anyway.
flashing low battery icon
NOOOOOOOOooooo......
But the notebook also gives me a little reassurance. The notebook's batteries won't run out. It's memory won't get corrupted. The physical act of writing an idea out ensures that I actually do it, rather than having the nebulous idea of "I must put that in OneNote", and then not doing it.
This gives me a moment to reflect on whether writing long hand would connect me to what I'm writing also. If I were to write out my work longhand, would a connection to that work make it easier or harder to build the story? Would I be less inclined to change a story I had invested so much in? Would I be more inclined to think about what I'm writing and write a better story to begin with?
I think, for my next competition entry, I may write a long hand short story and see how it works out in the first draft.

Sunday 12 November 2017

The Cat of St. Ives (Part IV)

Our growing moan a lofty growl,
that would become a clashing howl
enforcing them to soon renounce,
as they came forth and we did pounce,
their hold on Truro ere the end
of night when we their flesh did rend
with fang and claw and shaken head
and many bodies fell down dead,
of ours and theirs, but we were true
and in the scores the rats we slew
until the dawn above the sea
showed to us the rats aflee.
But as we sat to count the cost
we realised the town was lost.
I tried to tend my sund'red flanks
and too extend the many thanks
obliged onto the feline hoard
who stood beside me on the board
of Truro's dock throughout the night
when finally we'd brought the fight.
Too late the rat was put to flight.
Despite my effort all the blood
still left me just like murine flood
without the bounds of Truro's lanes.
I felt the growing battle pains
and settled down to rest a mite,
then realised the fading light
as all my strength it passed away
as fateful night turned fatal day.

Sunday 5 November 2017

The Cat of St. Ives (Part III)

The Cat of St. Ives (Part III)

Goodly men laid in the ground

in numbers that would all astound.
Others fled, to better fare
away from Truro's streets now where
the cursed French their chance did take,
to raid in Kernow in the wake
of death, they came for all to take
using then the total break.

We, the toast of land a time,
were hated now, for no more crime
than being not so numerous
as to put down the murine curse.
Most the feline hoard had fled,
in face of that unwholesome dread,
but I could not give up so well
and, though it may be me in hell
I sought the docks one final time,
to see what conquest could be mine
before the noxious, blackened beast
could curse the world, cause all to cease.

My heart it battled in my chest,
my feet rebelling my behest,
and every creak and scrap and din,
caused my valour to within
me wither like a child of fear
aquailing at the coming near
of all the visitations dark
that fill our nightmares to the mark.

And all around me then there stirred
a gentle patter barely heard,
of softened feet alighting down
from lofty heights and through the town
my brethren, sistren came along
and putting up one valiant song
defiant in the face of fright
and on into the dark'ning night
determined to put all to flight
who dared demean our feline might.