Monday 25 September 2017

The Cat of St. Ives (Part II)

The Cat of St. Ives (Part II)


I never was a cat of home,
and born the streets I was to roam
from Tom unknown, and mother cold
I learned from young my course to hold.
It wasn't always pain and pine,
though verily in winter time,
and oft I would a sated sleep
take neath the night and dream to keep
of when my life would always be
of comfort, warmth and joyous glee.

But moon on moon the hardships came,
and when the rats from sunny Spain
the black death carried we became
the heroes of the town again.
Dark of coat and black of eye,
quick of mind a lythely by
the guard and dockhand they would slip
on into town to nibble, nip,
and chew through cast off food and grime;
the humans' waste their baleful crime,
attracting such a numerous crowd
who carried with them darkened clowd.

The simple flea, a stowaway
that lived among us every day,
hosted by the humble rat,
the loyal dog, and sovreign cat,
brought to the land a baleful gloom,
a loathsome curse, a ghastly doom.
And as the first afflicted foundered
blame was cast and fear resounded.
I myself to Truro bounded.

Tuesday 19 September 2017

The Cat of St. Ives (Part 1)

I'm publishing the beginning extract of a poem I started a long time ago, while I was living in Luton. The first line came to me while I was half-listening to the radio. They were talking about "puzzles" that a really only tricks, and the famous "As I was going to St. Ives..." problem came up.

Suddenly, the first line of my poem popped into my head, and I had to write it. Here it is, presented unedited. Maybe this will be my encouragement to finally finish it.


The Cat of St. Ives (Part I)

As I was running from to St. Ives,
I met a cat with seven lives 
Who bid of me the time of day 
and offered company a way. 
I thought it kind and did agree 
For her to walk a while with me 
And as we passed the time away 
She told me of her life's affray 
In dark of night and silent day 
From mankind's trials to cast away. 
We made our way past Hellesveor 
and on the day toward Zennor 
where, in The Tinners, toward the eve 
I called my friend for a reprieve 
and though the landlord doubted me 
my coin was good enough for he 
to let my familiar and I
to spend the night the fire by.
Twas then I saw the furred mark
more visible in gloom and dark
that told me my companion
had lost a life, if only one,
and thrust I to request the lay 
if not too much, of fateful day.


Please, enjoy. I welcome criticism, but I mean criticism. If you don't have anything to say that would help make this better, probably best not to say anything.